Hi all, My name is Julie I love to write thriller, mysteries. I retired five years ago and loving it. My passion besides writing are my thee parrots. I adore them. I also have two dogs. I would love to hear all your feedback on my stories. I have a short essay that I would appreciate all your feedback on before the holiday. I have to read this at Thanksgiving this year. I feel my piece is missing something. If you have any ideas how I can improve this and yet keep it relatively short that would help me out a lot. Thank you all ahead of time. I can't wait to meet you all and read your stories as well.