I'm submitting this story to a contest and need feeback to help me shape it up before the deadline, end of May 2008. It's an excerpt of a novel I am working on, which follows the experiences of a 20 year old squatter in late '90s London. Obviously I'd like it to be as good as possible, so any input about what you did/didn't like is useful - I'm new at publishing! (NOTE: Those who are strongly anti-drug may be offended by the subject. Consider yourselves forewarned)