I'm from Indonesia, nice to meet you all :) Actually writing story only my hobby, when I have time, i will go typing :) My friends told i have talent in it & they keep telling me to be serious in it. Lately i have several friends from abroad, so I try to type story in English language, and one of my friend said try to upload in writing.com, you will get a lot of constructive comments that will improving your writing, don't keep save it on your computer. So I listen to him, and try to upload my first English story. My English language isn't very good, so I hope all of you can understand my typing and can read it well :)