Society Intern Chapter 1

This is the prologue to a story i'll be publishing here and Amazon. Notes on bottom

It was an early morning, sometime in September, on top of Pasternak Bridge. The world was in order. All, except two creatures, locked in combat.
“Old Pasty”, as the bridge was fondly known, was a strong bridge. It had survived four wars, seven boat accidents, and multiple other disasters. And it certainly would be able to survive two humanoids fighting on top of it.
One being looked like a normal human. From afar, he would have looked normal, if not for the ram antlers behind his back. The other being was decidedly nonhuman. It had two sets of deer antlers, and it looked like it was wearing a cape, like it was some sort of supervillain. You could also faintly see a cowboy cap on his back.
It looked like the caped being was violently punching the other person.
The horned man said,”Why do I have to do this to you,Azzie?”, before punching the other man back.
Azzie replied “Harder.”
The horned man then began to go to the pavement beneath Pasternak Bridge.He smashed Azzie to the floor. His brains spread all across the pavement. It looked like a bucket of red paint had been smashed onto the floor.
Azzie was nearly dead, but he had one more thing to say.
“HARDER, MAGGOT!”

After he finished him off, the horned man then flew off. He didn’t notice the crystal left in the remains of Azzie’s skull.
No one did notice.

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So, what do you think of it. I thought it was edgy