Professional Eliminators

Professional Eliminators - The Second Day of October

Oct. 2: - "Plot: Premise" ▼
Now that you've brainstormed the general story idea, let's identify some story elements:
(1) Setting(s). Where does your story take place?
(2) Protagonist(s). Who is(are) your main character(s)?
(2b) Flaw(s). What is(are) the protagonist's major flaw(s)?
(2c) Goal(s). What does(d) the protagonist(s) want (or want to avoid)?
(3) Conflict(s). What's keeping them from their goal(s)?
(4) Antagonist(s). Who or what is creating the conflict(s)?

Just for fun: Write a provocative one-sentence description of your story.
Example: A young, mistreated orphan discovers he is a wizard and must face the evil villain Voldemort to fulfill his destiny.

*** Wikipedia's definition of Narrative Conflict

1. The only real setting that is somewhat constant in this novel is the invisible spaceship where Collina and her two lovers live when she’s not eliminating a TriLan or a group of TriLans. That’s not the only setting, though. It’s just the constant one. The whole planet of TriLan might be a Setting in this novel. Maybe not all of it. But a lot of it will be.

2. Collina will be the main protagonist of this novel. She will be in every part of every chapter. Even the ones that Roobic and Maveen are the main part of.

2A. Collina’s main flaw is that she doesn’t give up when it comes to eliminations. She also gets hurt a lot too. But so far, she hadn’t been eliminated too. Thanks mostly to her lover Maveen. He didn’t know everything healthcare. He has kept her alive so far, though. The same is kind of true about Roobic. Only he’s an expert at Data Information. His flaw is that it often takes him a long time to get the information that he’s looking for.

2b. Collina’s goal is to find out who is trying to eliminate her and why they are doing it. Roobic’s goal is to continue to help Collina any way that he can. The same is true for Maveen.

3. The ones who are trying to eliminate her are the ones causing all the conflict with Collina.
4.Whoever is trying to eliminate Collina are the antagonist