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Printed from https://shop.writing.com/main/books/entry_id/1043600-night-is-hung
Rated: 18+ · Book · Spiritual · #1149750
12.3k views, 2xBest Poetry Period. A nothing from nowhere cast words to a world wide wind.
#1043600 added February 14, 2023 at 9:35am
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night is hung
i view you as if for the last
is it the last?

i listen light
heart tightening
clutched for you

i yearn hold holographic vision
before revision

i touch soft singular screen
pixeled vision fading

i savor again as you go out
licked light


on my porch joined
cinnamon stick stirs a black tea

in rockers reclined, rest
dust creeps sour eyes stung, as night hung

to bed
shall i dream of you instead?


1.24.23
does it end here?
there's always a parting shot.

the past will be repast will be past
in this paste thickening

2.14.23 edited structure with couplets primarily instead of consistent three-line stanzas to eliminate need for punctuation in places calling for it. does it end here comment added as two lines.

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