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This is probably the most chaotic branch I've seen you write.

I like that Will keeps the book and can do stuff with it, but has so many complications added in - Seth for one (which I presume will find a way to slide in, especially if Chelsea lashes on him with Gordon), Yumi and Cindy on the other, and then there's Brittany and Addison who'll feel out of place for being ignored. So many moving pieces to play, with the opportunity to replace some of the cheerleaders.

I'll admit that I feel intrigued with Seth, of all people, learning and effectively becoming involved. One group is driven by revenge and the other by curiosity, but Seth is such a wild card it's hard to say where everything'll move. It'd be fun to see this as a bonding moment between him and Keith, making unlikely friends out of enemies.