Very good, romantic, inspiring. Keep writing! You should enter poetry mouse's poetry contest! I think the addy is:
poetrycmouse.com
let me know if it's not. I do have it wrote down somewhere! Good luck!!
I really like this. It makes you want to join in on the conversation :D . I think you could get published if you try . I wish you luck in your success.
I liked this piece. The Author could do without so much description. Description is good, but you don't want it to be too long, or the reader loses interest. Other than that, I thought it was really good and carefully wrote.
This was good. Very 'vivid', which I like. I kept wanting to read it, which I also like. I think you should 'keep at it'..I could give You the name of my Publisher,,,if interested?
This was an interesting piece. But, I feel it was a little unattached. I think it could use more of the Author's personal emotions to bring out some 'umph'. It would be a great story if told well. You just have to 'tweak' it a little to grab the attention of your readers.
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