This is wonderful poem. We all have one such extended family member dear to us. The language is excellent with a positive note with a touch of appropriate melancholy. One of great poems I came across in recent past. Thanks for sharing
The story started on very positive note. May be you can add on more incidents to the story. By way of Alex the story shows that there are good people in this world who go above the call of duty. I am also a budding wrirer. Hence it is also hard for me to go beyond a few paragraphs. But we can try. Good story. Keep writing.
Mr. Dennis I in the same place as you are. I have not retired yet. Still have responsibilties. I was an avid reader during high school. But to put it in a brief phrase, life came in the way. But like you, I am going to work on it now. Thank you for this piece.
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