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Review of The Beast  
Review by Kali
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
I really like the way this is worded and phrased. I wish you had done punctuation differently. But its your choice. Your work. Good job!
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Review of Black Hole  
Review by Kali
Rated: E | (3.0)
I love the choppiness of this. It gives it a very empty tone. There are a few things I didn't personally like. For it to be so short and choppy, don't repeat words, it takes away from the poem.
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Review of My Angel  
Review by Kali
Rated: E | (3.5)
This is very heartwarming. I can't really realate, but I can only imagine. Good job and I'm sorry for your loss.
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Review of Love  
Review by Kali
Rated: E | (3.0)
I didn't really like all of the ryhming in this. It takes attention away from the poem.
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Review by Kali
Rated: E | (2.0)
I don't really care for this. It's very simple and choppy. The same idea isn't incorporated so it doesn't flow very well. It has an understandable potential. It's just not portraid good.
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Review by Kali
Rated: E | (4.0)
"And they say when you fall in love, that you forget the stuff in your past and focus on the future you will have with them," I also completley agree with this line.
It's very hard to see the negative when you love someone, whether it is in a relationship or with family, sometimes even friend. There are some things I didn't really care for in this but its all a matter of opinion. Good work.
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Review of Remember When  
Review by Kali
Rated: E | (3.0)
This was very simple and plain. I really enjoyed the heart put into it. I feel most can relate to this and we can even see it happening. Good job.
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Review of Life of Teenager  
Review by Kali
Rated: E | (3.5)
This was really good and very understandable. Good work!
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Review by Kali
Rated: E | (4.5)
This was very intresting good job
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Review by Kali
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
good job
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Review of Homecoming  
Review by Kali
Rated: E | (5.0)
Well, this was entertaining.
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Review of Surprise!  
Review by Kali
Rated: E | (3.0)
Very intresting! Good job!
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Review of Always a Victim  
Review by Kali
Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
I really enjoyed some of the word choices in this, they were different.
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Review of Mildred  
Review by Kali
Rated: E | (3.0)
Thid had a choppy flow to it. I liked the story but in a way, I didn't. It seemed a little blunt? I feel you could add a little more..
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Review by Kali
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
There were some things that had a choppy flow. However, I enjoyed your word choices and phrases. This story gave a sense of suspence, which I loved. Good job!
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Review of Who Am I?  
Review by Kali
Rated: E | (3.0)
This was very deep, had a lot of emotion. Very good job!
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Review of Truth  
Review by Kali
Rated: E | (4.0)
This is very deep. Brings out a lot of emotion, good work!
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Review of Possesion  
Review by Kali
Rated: E | (3.0)
The grammar in this was a little off. But this was a good idea! Good work!
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Review of Aggravation  
Review by Kali
Rated: E | (4.0)
The comparisons in this are so gross! I love it! They're very different. Good work!
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Review of Sweater Weather  
Review by Kali
Rated: E | (4.0)
This poem makes me want to cuddle up and go to sleep or watch a movie. Great work with words! I get chills just thinking about the cold weather. It was very simple and easy to understand and relate to.
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Review by Kali
Rated: E | (5.0)
Ahhh! I LOVED this! I can relate to this so much! Great job. This was very meaningful and deep. The word and phrase choices were amazing as well.
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Review of Bliss  
Review by Kali
Rated: E | (3.0)
Very short. Not quite sure what the idea of this poem was. However the last three lines are very good. I would want to use them in the future.
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Review of He Will Tell You  
Review by Kali
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
This poem is short and choppy, but very deep. The only suggestion I can give is to maybe reword some things instead of constantly using the phrase "and how.." it gives it a repetitive flow. However, I still loved it!
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Review by Kali
Rated: E | (3.0)
This is so gross. It literally makes me want to puke. Very well written imagery! Good job!
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Review of Innocence  
Review by Kali
Rated: E | (4.5)
I LOVED THIS! It is so relatable to almost everyone! I felt like a child reading this! Great job!!
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