That's some daredevil you created there. I enjoyed reading your story. I liked the ending. I liked how you created tension as the hero rode down the road and his natural self saved the day.
Your writing is pretty pugnacious but I admire the voice and point of view. It's a good portrait description of a suffering writer and what he is going through. I like it very much. Your piece could be expanded into a screenplay. Or a straight fiction story. Congrats.
Your piece sounds good to me. It reminds me of "acting the part" even if you feel sad, your demeanor will impress others who may be making you feel sad.
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