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Review by Phaedra
Rated: 13+ | (2.5)
I find your poem challenging. I found it hard to sense any emotion and there seems to be so much abstract imagery. The 'she' is hard to relate to and the giant is also contrary - to stare AND weep.
The use of descriptive words do excellently set the scene and give a tone but it seems to be combining too much in one poem.
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