An interesting concept. Are Zack and Cody the only focused characters, though? Will add to this, if I can, as many transformation interactives are ones I find I get stumped on.
An interesting idea using Asian girls. If I can think of any additions, I'll add, no guarantes. Still, not a bad concept oveall, plenty of original characters.
Excellent view on kindness. I've learned over the years to be kind about all sorts of things, especially criticism, meaning that I don't criticize for kicks, but I point out where I think things went wrong.
Short, but, well done. Have veterans in my own family, mainly former US Navy officers, like my late grandfather. Also have an uncle who served in Vietnam. I believe, if my history is right, may have had a great grandfather who fought during World War I.
Fan of age regression, as well as many cartoons, though older ones. Still, plan to dd to as many as I can, snce I'm fmiliar with may cartoons from the 90's and a few from earlie decades.
Short, but, well done. Never heard of bit of honey before. My fiance does like flowers, but, she also likes being taken out to lunch or dinner, but, flowers are still nice.
Well done. Have heard about that day, and I know the song American Pie was inspired by it, which is how I first heard about it, actually. I was born in a later time after it happened, but, can imagine the tragedy many fans and fellow musicians had in reaction.
You have my attention. Very intresting interactive suggestion. Will add as much as I can to it, when I'm inspired to do so. Excellent set of rules as well, rules I'll keep in mind when making additions.
A very interesting concept you've got here. Will add to as many of the path options as I can, as I'm sure many of the suggestions will be inspired by video games, or other media I'm familiar with.
Great idea, with a nice set of rules, too. If any of my chapters will be one-sentence, it's mainly due to me adding possible path ideas that I think might work. Hope you don't mind that.
An interesting concept. Will see if I can come up with possible additions for it, if at all. Even if I can't, I wish best of luck to those who do add to it.
Not a bad concept, though I've only seen the film that inspired this story a few times, so can't recall it much, and expanding characters isn't for me. Still, I'm sure you'll find people it can appeal to.
I do love age regression stories. I can understand you wanting to stop regressing at 5, as being younger than that isn't for everyone, a rule I'm willing to respect. May have some idaes for additions for this one already, if I can think of how to write them, givng Clair, was it, a boyfriend, maybe, if you wish. Will see if any of your other interactives catch my interest, if I can think of anything for them, that is.
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