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Review of She has a Name  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello

My Thoughts:

A very unique and interesting poem. I loved it and hope 'She' finds her true self again.

My Suggestions:

None, well written and no errors :)

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Review of A Christmas Poem  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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My Thoughts:
I love this poem. Not only well written but just brings a smile to my face for the Holidays that are coming.

My Suggestions:
None. No mistakes found and well written.

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Review of Every Love.  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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My Thoughts:

I loved this poem. Well written and does make one think about things.

My Suggestions:

None

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Rated: E | (5.0)
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My Thoughts:

A cute and well-written. Does make me wonder which I would be lol.


My Suggestions:

None from me.

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Review of Chapter 13  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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My Thoughts:

This is well written and compelling from the start. Your words flow and makes a very interesting story.

My Suggestions:

I have no suggestions and saw no errors. I hope to see more of this story as you write it.

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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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My Thoughts:

A fascinating and well-written story. I enjoyed each line to the end; your opening paragraph had a strong hook to captivate the reader.

My Suggestions:

No Suggestions as it is an amazing story.

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Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
Hello

My Thoughts:

This is a beautifully written story. I loved reading every line not wanting it to end. Please keep writing more like this.

My Suggestions:

No suggestions needed

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Review by The Pen Mage
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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My Thoughts:

Great poem about the NFL and the season starts this coming Thursday, 05 September, 2024

My Suggestions:

No Suggestions as it was written excellently

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Review of Right Thirst  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello

My Thoughts:

This is a great story that reminds us to move past our fears we must push past it like the deer did. It is hard to overcome fears at times but with confidence & strength in our willpower, it can be done.

My Favorite Part:

Everything did love the ending thinking the deer was gone but he succeeded!

My Suggestions:

None! This was written excellently.

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Review by The Pen Mage
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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My Thoughts:

I love this story as our siblings are true friends. You have a great family for sure.

My Favorite Part:

Everything. From the start, I was hooked and would love to read more.

My Suggestions:

I don't have any suggestions, it is very well written.

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Review of Sorrow  
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
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My Thoughts:
This is a very well written story and enjoyed it. You flow through the story was firm and the energy of your writing can be felt

My Suggestions:
There was just one minor typo at the start of the 4th Paragraph you called Truman, "Truaman." otherwise, well done.

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Review by The Pen Mage
Rated: ASR | (1.0)
I think most of us love the Beach Boys but please write about that not sharing links.


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Review of Positive Thinking  
Review by The Pen Mage
Rated: E | (5.0)
This is a great poem and I love how positive it is. It is very well written with no problems seen.

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Review by The Pen Mage
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi,

I hope you are doing well. It is a very nice and interesting poem. I did not spot any issues and would love to read more.

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Review by The Pen Mage
Rated: E | (3.5)
Hi,

Interesting poem, love it but needs some work as shown below. Pay attention to your punctuation as well. You have a promising career ahead of you. I would suggest downloading Grammarly to help with your writing.

The Pen Mage

Remove the comma after Love me to read Love me or hate me 1st line

I am who I am there's no changing who I am. Love Me, or hate me I am not perfect but true. Love Me or hate me my imperfections are ~Insert Period

Are sharper than (If the Are is a continuation of the are ending the first paragraph then join the two lines as the use of two are"s is redundant.)
Are sharper than a needle, brighter than botax. Love Me or hate me I will stand tall like a statue and be strong like concrete. Love Me or

Hate me this is me and i'm not ashamed (Bring this sentence up to align up with the or used to end above)


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Review by The Pen Mage
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Awesome work. Enjoyed reading this and no mistakes that I could find. Would love to read more.


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Review of The Box of Toys  
Review by The Pen Mage
Rated: E | (5.0)
Awesome Poem! Toy Story Vibe for sure and well written. Each sentence flowed to the other.

Keep up the great work!!


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Review of The Markets  
Review by The Pen Mage
Rated: E | (5.0)
Very interesting poem. I have not seen one before about the stock market but well written and I enjoyed reading your work.


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Review of The New Year  
Review by The Pen Mage
Rated: E | (5.0)
Love this poem! Not only well written but deep in thought. Very well done!
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Review by The Pen Mage
Rated: E | (5.0)
A very interesting story. Very well written but the last block you should break it into paragraphs, IMHO.


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Review of Hello Old Friend  
Review by The Pen Mage
Rated: E | (5.0)
Great Poem and well written and I can relate to this as well.


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