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#1040289 added November 5, 2022 at 10:34am
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Something is Wrong
Must I say anything? Just look at this beautiful vase. It's colors are perfect and its gloss is just as shiny.

Wait? What is this? A crack at the bottom? Something is wrong here, it's just too good too be true. If it leaks then I can't buy it. It's no good to buy a vase with a crack on the bottom. I'll try the next vase.

This vase is very earthy, down to earth from the tip to the bottom. Yet it is suitable to hold water in. I must buy it.

Alas- here is something wrong, yet again. I see a hole in the bottom. It will leak. This I can't do. No, no, no I won't buy it.

Prompt: 'Here is something wrong- a feeling'
Word count: 131
Contest: "Invalid Item" 
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