#1043600 added February 14, 2023 at 9:35am Restrictions: None
night is hung
i view you as if for the last
is it the last?
i listen light
heart tightening
clutched for you
i yearn hold holographic vision
before revision
i touch soft singular screen
pixeled vision fading
i savor again as you go out
licked light
on my porch joined
cinnamon stick stirs a black tea
in rockers reclined, rest
dust creeps sour eyes stung, as night hung
to bed
shall i dream of you instead?
1.24.23
does it end here?
there's always a parting shot.
the past will be repast will be past
in this paste thickening
2.14.23 edited structure with couplets primarily instead of consistent three-line stanzas to eliminate need for punctuation in places calling for it. does it end here comment added as two lines.
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