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Pane-ful Obsession - Week 8

pane-ful obsession


her tail flicks, a wild instinctive rhythm
eyes fixed upon bustling birds
the cat at the window

Written for Promptly Poetry "Promptly Poetry Challenge (2025-2026)" 

Week 8 - Form - the Kimo

The Kimo is the Israeli version of the Japanese Haiku.

Content: like haiku, usually image-specific and acts as a still life,
or snapshot, of a single moment

Form: made up of a single stanza of three lines

Syllable Count:
[Line 1] 10 syllables
[Line 2] 7 syllables
[Line 3] 6 syllables