Nezoom 2024

Oct 15, 24 Outline Revision 2

October 15, 2024 Plot: Outline Revision 2



The eight point story arc



Stasis:

Our new prelude shows Kris older and her duties of gate keeper for Zaume Mountain, which she frequently shirks to ride her gravel glider down to the Market and Space Port.

Trigger:

At the end of the Prelude is the attack on the Zaume, resulting in their deaths, Aga’s death, and the capture of Kris and Tee. It will end with her escape from that captivity ....



The Quest

Kris’s psychic abilities let her glean from others how to survive, including how to steal and sneak in and out of the Market and Space Port.



Surprises

Kris is caught when she tries to sneak into and steal from The Arena and Casino. She is then auctioned off as a slave.

Because of her blatant disrespect for her masters, she is passed from one to another and finally ends up in chains in a dungeon. DuraH rescues her; believing she has information that will clear his family name.

When DuraH finds out the intel he received on Kris was a lie, he tries to set her free and chase her away. Kris follows DuraH and ends up saving his life after he is mortally wounded in a fight.

Kris enters The Gauntlet to earn money to fix DuraH’s ship. She wins of course, but disappears after collecting her winnings. Rumors start that she is a ghost of the guardians of the Zaume; or a demon that had led the Zaume to their doom.





Critical Choice

Keeps following DuraH even though he still won’t accept her. Ends up in a Tavern and is recognized....



Climax

As written



Reversal

Chooses to pledge loyalty to DuraH.



Resolution

Leaves Nezoom with DuraH on his quest to clear his family name.