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Rated: 18+ · Book · Thriller/Suspense · #2327886
A successful businesswoman is held for ransom
#1080930 added December 8, 2024 at 6:51pm
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Plotting
9pm Monday May 27th - Passaic Industrial Park New Jersey
Gretchen releases a roar of excitement on the site of the vehicles "wohooooooooo, the time has come, at last, I can't wait to extract every penny from that lard ball".

"Shhhhhhhhh' warns Florence "lets not draw attention to ourselves. On a large workshop table set food supplies, weapons, the medication and Prudence's stolen clothes.

Florence looks in at the medication "Oh dear, she has quiet a bit!" her gut warns her against this, she doesn't want Prudence hurt but then again Prudence will make more money and she'll never get to earn as much. She struggles to accept this justification.

Gretchen with an unlit cigarette in her mouth is trying on one of Prudence's suits, it is too short on the legs and way to wide in the waist. This gets a chuckle out of the rest of the crew. She places the suit jacket on which is too short and too wide. She begins to mimic Prudence with a waddle making gasping sounds. She passes her phone to Richie "take a picture Hon"

"No way!!! are you mad!!" he asks raising his tone. He checks her phone is off "Remember no phones!!, they could be tracking you and I, only use the ones we got from Dodgy Dave!"

Henry rolls out sketches of their plan drawn on A4 paper. We need to go through this again and again a few more times.

Florence struggles with her gut "I need the money, I need the money, I need the money, she has too much, way to much", she keeps reminding herself.

"We've got to pack these up too", pointing at the table, next time we come here its to collect and snatch. We won't be coming back here again!"

"Also" warns Florence, make sure we leave no clues.

"Fuck clues" dismisses Gretchen carelessly "they will suspect us already, so fuck it!"

"Well" shouts Florence annoyed "They won't suspect me or Henry!!".

"Let's all calm down" asks Richie raising his palms up and down together "There will be no clues left, don't worry Florence".

He picks up the medication and places it into the truck of the Charger "We need to know what she knows right now".

Florence listens to him anxiously "Did you speak with Dodgy Dave? we're paying him enough!"

Henry looks over towards the motor cycle and admires it one more time, he really wants to take it out for a spin. "Did he tell you yet where your leaving this later"

Richie stops concealing the guns within the Vantura. "No!! all I know is that I'll have an old scooter which I'll need to abandon outside the Grenville General Store which some hoodlums will burn out. Don't forget will need you to come collect me"

Florence now frustrated and anxious turns on Richie "DON'T IGNORE MY QUESTION, DID YOU GET DODGY DAVE TO LOOK INTO WHAT SHE KNOWS?"

Richie sighs and looks skywards, how he regrets getting her involved "I just got distracted, yes I did, he's hoping tomorrow.".

Florence grunts "well he better!".
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