Little Poems - Haiku - Tanka - Etc

Desperation

Desperation

A stomach ache
can take
away
a day

The work and fun
undone
detain
in pain

Taking a pill
when ill
could help
the yelp
         ~~jvg

Notes: ▶︎

A 30 Second Poem is a twisted Minute Poem created as a challenge at Writing.com by CJ. The elements are the same as the Minute Poem with the syllable count cut in half.
         1. A verse form written in 3 quatrains
         2. syllabic 4-2-2-2 4-2-2-2 4-2-2-2 per line
         3. rhymed aabb ccdd eeff

Entered Round 1

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