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Round One: Epic Battle of the Pens Title: "Simon is Born" Submitted By: Merry_Mikey } For this round, each contestant is asked to create an entire profile for a newly developed character. The character can be for a video game OR they can give life to an inanimate object. There is no word limit in this round. The more detailed, well rounded and complete the profile is, the better. Special attention to layout and attention to detail will be key elements of this round. On a scale of 1-25 ~ How well guidelines were followed? Points Available On Time: 4 Complied with prompt: 5 Detailed Profile 8 Layout: 8 Points Awarded On Time: 4 Complied with prompt: 4 Detailed Profile 6 Layout: 7 Total Points Awarded: 21 Comments On Time: Entry was submitted on time. Complied with prompt: I'm assuming a video game character, but there's nothing here that indicates that is your intention. Detailed Profile: We learned nothing of what Simon looks like. We were shown some of Simons mental/emotional characteristics. Layout: Paragraph form. "Born" in the title should be capitalized Thank You For Entering "Invalid Item" |