Very well said, Sue. I agree with life is satisfying once we stop focusing on other's happiness and instead of focusing on ourselves. It was a difficult lesson but one that changed my life.
Oh Wow! I wasn't expecting you to put God as our business partner at the end. I was too busy getting mad at the man in the story who kept the 100%.
Great story plot, btw. You certainly zeroed in on the man's ingratitude effectively. I guess, we all experience a bit of that ingratitude at one time or another in our lives. A big Ooops!
When we laughed .. it smelled of our childhood left behind . I deliberately chose Tuberoses or Rajanigandha flowers for the lunch table .
Somehow these flowers with their delicate fragrance smelled of earth .. a life of innocence left far behind .
Today with childhood friends .. Sunday became special . The moody clouds that loomed grey on the day cleared to sun.
We laughed , we joked we ate and drank .. we made plans for the next meet long before the day was over . That was Sunday , precious, warm and happy !
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