Thank you, Anni. Maybe I'm a masochist because I do like making things difficult for myself. I considered rhyming each line as well, but that was a bridge too far. Perhaps next time...
Sweet forgiveness is rare enough
in the blame culture of today;
we’re not made of such fine stuff,
more often needing someone to pay
the piper wants his pound of flesh,
and slight offence requires rebuke,
so every cut just wounds afresh,
and slightest hurt demands a nuke.
Line count: 8
Rhymed abab
For Express It In Eight, 11.02.23
Prompt: Forgiveness.
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