Thank you, Anni. Maybe I'm a masochist because I do like making things difficult for myself. I considered rhyming each line as well, but that was a bridge too far. Perhaps next time...
Shadows move closer,
leaping at the windows,
blurred and flickering,
as the train enters the cutting.
Empty fields ensue,
now the shadows lengthen,
tall spectres racing, hurdling
gates, fences and hedges.
Line count: 8
Free verse
For Express It In Eight, 05.20.22
Prompt: Begin your poem with, “Shadows move closer.”
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