Thank you for that, Kiya - it's not many brave the wilds of my portfolio to discover my little 8-line poems, so it's wonderful to have some feedback on them. Much appreciated!
Wonderful poem that links footprints to bits and pieces of our memories over the years.
As we get older, we do leave a mark behind - footprints if you will - and even as they fade away, they'll always linger and be a reminder of what we once were.
Thanks for sharing this poignant piece with us, and keep on writing!
“Preserve your memories
they’re all that’s left you”
Simon & Garfunkel - Bookends 1968
Each stitch in the tapestry
a memory preserved
in the album of the past
and blue and white the hands
that turn the dark pages
of yesteryear
the dusty volume
of your history.
Line count: 8
Free verse
For Express It In Eight, 05.25.25
Prompt: Write a poem entitled “Tapestry of Memory.”
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