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Apr 16, 2006 at 10:02pm
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please r/r/r soon.
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My agent wants me to clean up the grammar and remove the passive voice. Where should I do more showing? Please tell what I owe for the r/r/r and I will gladly send it to you.



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please r/r/r soon. · 04-16-06 10:02pm
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