Writer's Fallout Shelter

Thanks for your response and advice - and other advice that has been given. I'm trying to apply as much of that advice as I can. I'm revising, adding additional, clear goals for my main character, and I am trimming out what I can so as to be concise, etc. As always, still open for advice on the book, but I am trying to apply what I have. The difference between editing revision and "re-envisioning" are vast! First one can be relatively painless, but the second can be extremely difficult. But I'm trying.

Thank you again.

-Renegade