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Title: Servants of Night Chapter: (Chapter 19) Author: Sephina ![]() ![]() Plot: James going through with his plan and getting pulled in more. This is believable. Scene/Setting: Good during scene at Angie's. Smells aand sounds would enhance this scene. Characters: Natalie-if she's really missing James, I'm not feeling it. She is very quick to accept his dinner ivitation. James-not sure how I feel about him. I want to know what he intends to do. What his plan is. Inner dialogue doesn't seem to be working. Angie-is she a domme? She has that feel about her, but I dont' think she's pulling it off. If she's going for control, then she is too kind. I expect h er to toy with James a bit, work the guilt angle to draw him in more. Grammar: see line edits. Just My Personal Opinion Still interested and will keep reading. Line Edits: James drug himself up the stairs and to Angie's doors. For the past week, he hadn't the energy to do much of anything but think about Natalie. Oh, sure he left her convinced there was someway he could win her back, but he still hadn't thought of one. Taking a deep breath, he entered Angie's apartment. He hadn't been here for a week either. I must have earned a mini vacation. Angie sat on the couch laughing at something Seth had said. The spiked-haired man was next to her, his arm relaxing on the back of the couch. When his pale blue eyes fell on James, they narrowed a bit. "Hey, Jim." He smiled at Seth and bowed to Angie. I don't think I have it in me to act tonight. "Good evening. Come here, my little stud." Angie stood and he walked into her waiting embrace. She ran her hands down his back and grabbed his ass. "How have you been?" "Fine. What do you need?" She took his chin in her hand. "What's wrong with my little guy?" "I'm sorry, Angie, I haven't been feeling well lately." "Well, I know something that will make you feel better. Come with me." She brushed by him and went into her bedroom with Seth close behind. He sighed before following parting the beads covering her doorway. Angie let her robe fall to a pool of silk at her feet. Despite his mood, he couldn't deny she was an attractive woman. He closed his eyes remembering her soft skin yielding to his touch as he explored the curves of her body. Guilt and regret burned him as he thought it should have been Natalie beneath him. The sound of Seth undressing next to him shocked him back to the present. Angie sat on the edge of her bed and Seth joined her, his penis well on its way to a full erection. James stomach rolled. "What's going on?" Seth placed kisses on her shoulder as she answered, "I wanted to spend some quality time with you two. You can take those confining clothes off." "You don't- I mean- I'm not gay." Angie and Seth laughed. James cheeks caught on fire. "What's the matter, Jim? Not secure enough in your manhood to share a woman with another man?" "Stop it, Seth." Angie stood and sauntered up to James. She pulled his coat off and let it fall to the floor. "I'm not asking you to have sex with him. Although, if you two wish to do that, I won't stop you." Grabbing handfuls of his t-shirt she pulled him closer and tore the fabric. It joined his coat. Her lips caressed his neck up to his ear. "You don't have to touch him at all." Her hand slipped under his waist band and she tugged him over to the bed. Seth reached under her arms and fondled her breasts as she helped James out of his jeans. The sultry groans she gave as Seth touched her caused his own penis to grow. What am I thinking? I don't want this. But his body reacted anyway. Angie grabbed his shoulders and forced him onto the mattress. As she crawled over him, her hard nipples traced his legs. She covered one of his nipples with her mouth as Seth busied himself with her other end. He tried not to think about what Seth did, but as he aroused Angie, her attempts to stimulate him grew more vigorous. What would Natalie say if she finds out? Would she want me back ever? Angie's soft lips descended down his torso until she reached his cock. Her thin fingers cupped his scrotum as she enveloped him into her mouth. Threads of pleasure ran over him. There's no way for her to find out. This is a great stress reliever if nothing else. this thought seems misplaced. Glancing up, he saw Seth positioning himself behind Angie. A muffled gasp escaped her throat and he knew Seth had penetrated her. Her tongue lapped at his cock like it was melting ice cream. Suddenly, her finger slipped into his rectum and he lost his breath at the desire that shot through his body. He almost came right then. He groaned, not able to stop his vocalizations. No one has made me feel this good ever. Even still there was a hollowness to it. He thrust harder into her warm mouth in an attempt to ignore it. For awhile, it worked, but after his fluids burst into Angie, it returned. Exhausted, he relaxed into the mattress as Seth and Angie finished. When they had, she curled up next to him with Seth on her other side. "Tomorrow, I need you two to go collect some payments for Michael." She kissed his shoulder and rubbed a finger over his nipple. "What kind of payments?" She smiled and used her fingernail to trace up his chest and neck. "I don't know. Michael provides businesses with certain services and they pay him for it." "Like protection money?" Seth laughed into Angie's shoulder. She caressed his cheek. "I really don't know. You don't have to force them to pay. They'll be expecting you. If anyone doesn't want to pay, just tell me and Michael will deal with it. You and Seth are couriers, nothing more." James shut eyes. What have I gotten myself into? *** Natalie was lying on Celeste's bed playing with the strings of a coral afghan. She glanced about her friend's room, enjoying the cozy décor. Celeste used earth tones as her colors and she knew how to add rugs, wall hangings and other accessories to make it more than a dorm room. She could easily imagine this being a room in remote cabin in the mountains. I wish I could do something like this with my room. "I'm sorry about you and James." Celeste sat in a chair croqueting another afghan. Natalie only nodded. It had been a little over a week since she called things off with him. She was certain she made the right decision, but there was still an empty spot in he left in her life. "He's not been to any of the coven meetings lately. What's going on with him?" "He's hanging out with some new people." Celeste twined some blue yarn around her needle. "I guess that happens. I didn't think he was into Wicca anyway. He always seemed more interested in using magic. Hopefully that's out of his system now. Still, it's a little sad to see him go." Natalie didn't say anything. She found there wasn't much she could say about it anymore. When she went over to Richard's she got everything off her chest then. Since then she stayed in her own room. With the passing days the threat of Langston had lessened. That worried her almost as much as seeing Langston again did. If she let her guard down she may not see him springing a trap on her. "Although that does remind me," Celeste began. "I don't think you'll be joining the coven, will you?" Natalie shook her head. "No. I'm sorry Celeste. I enjoy being with you and them. I don't think it's for me." "I understand. You're still more than welcome to attend our meetings." "Thanks." Celeste laughed. "I don't know how it's going to survive once I graduate." "It'll be fine. It may not be exactly how you want it to run, but I think it will it continue just fine." Celeste smiled still not looking entirely convinced. "I suppose you're right." She spent another hour so talking to Celeste before heading back to her dorm room. Tightening her scarf around her neck, she looked up at the sky. The night was clear, but it was hard to see the stars because of the street lights. "You shouldn't be walking by yourself after dark." Her heart nearly stopped as she turned to see James [x}had just come{/x}coming out of the science building. He had his backpack slung over one shoulder and his coat was only partly zipped. Her stomach flipped at seeing him again and she realized how much she missed him. "It's just campus." "I don't think your sister's sire is going to care much about that." Natalie glanced around. There were some other students, but none of them seemed to be paying attention to them. "Can I walk you back to your dorm?" She nodded seeing no reason to refuse him. He fell in step beside her. They remained silent for awhile.last sentence should be added to previous one. maybe, but neither spoke. "How's everything?" he finally asked. "Everything's been fine." "Cassandra hasn't tried to contact you?" "No." He looked down at the sidewalk. "I still worry about you." "It's only been a few days." "It's felt longer to me." She didn't know what to say. Is he trying to make me feel guilty? Kicking a stray stone, he glanced at her. "I'm sorry. I didn't mean to make things awkward." She adjusted the bag over her shoulder. His sad eyes caused her heart to ache. "Maybe we shouldn't see each other for a few weeks." "I don't think that's a good idea. The semester will nearly be over by then." "I'm not going anywhere." She planned on taking summer classes and would continue to stay on campus. When Quinn had taken her back home on Sunday morning, he said Richard wanted her to move into the mansion. She said she would need a few days to think it over. So far she had no doubts about doing so. Since summer plans had already been made she would stay on campus, but after that she would be free to move in. "Since I have an apartment, I guess I'll be here too." His gaze tried to lock on to hers, but she couldn't bring herself to meet it. "I still don't think we have to avoid each other for a few weeks." She tried not to sigh. A moment of relief washed over as she approached her dorm. I hope he doesn't want to come in. "Why don't I come over tomorrow night and we can have supper in the dining hall?" She stood in front of the doors. It seems like he's making more of an effort to see me now that we're broken up. facing them, or facing james? "Okay." "Thanks, Natalie. I'll come by about five." He smiled as he left. She opened the door feeling as if she were carrying a heavy weight. ![]() ** Image ID #1223148 Unavailable **
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