This is part one of a longer short story I'm writing. I just want some feedback on what I've done so far. There are quite a few elements in this so want to know what works and what doesn't. Honesty is crucial. Because it's quite long I'm happy to pay a few grand of GPs.
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The Siren · 06-04-11 6:11am by A Non-Existent User
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