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Oct 20, 2011 at 8:02am
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Review please:)
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I have a book that I am writing for three of my friends for christmas, and I desperately need reviews!!! I have my first five chapters up, but I'll only post my prologue on here. I really just want review on the characters, the dialogu (if its cheesy, if it flows, and if it sounds believable.)I want to know if the story is believable, if you can feel the emotion, and if it is interesting enough to continue. My dad has edited the prologue, but nothing else so if anyone reads my other chapters, sorry about the punctuation and paragraphing:) Thanks everybody!

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