DWG: WDC COMMUNITY REVIEW REQUESTS

I am new to Writing.com, though I have been writing for about fifteen years. I just don't know if it's any good. Truthfully all I want to do is write a good darn story, if you could help me with that I would appreciate it. I am looking to enter this short story in a competition on the site. I am tired of watching my stuff collect dust, either blow the dust off or blow the story up. One way or another, it is time. Yes, I will be honest, I have posted this statement in other review corners but it is a true statement.


Short Story about 2500 words.

http://www.writing.com/main/view_item/item_id/1869070-Spirit-Walker

ID #1869070

Thank You, I appreciate your time.