Let me first of all say - I agree with the general sentiment wholeheartedly.Though I do have some quibbles with your format ;) . One of my personal pet-hates is our tendency to turn an argumentative piece into a rant simply by disregarding the rules of clear expression relating to argumentative expression. Your piece is not quite as bad - but I believe its point could be stronger with a clearer structure (alright, I partially am picking on this because I have to write a review and ordinarily I would only think it - so I admit to being a nitpick here).
Christine
PS: I, by the way, admire all that are able and courageous enough to blog
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