October Novel Prep Challenge

Since I'm writing a new fan fiction story in November, it would be readers online who read this sort of thing.

But since I'm messing up a niche HP ship, I'll probably get flaming reviews ... not that I haven't gotten them before. I don't write sweet and I try to avoid writing a formulaic story. And I just became more evil and came up with a very sweet title - Thousand Rainy Days Since We First Met.

Protagonist unhappy with unambitious husband
Protagonist sets eyes on someone else and thinks there's something special
Protagonist dumps husband for someone else
AND then - someone else isn't on the same page as Protagonist because she's been an unreliable narrator

How could cruel author do this to Protagonist? Torturing fictional characters is the way I roll.

To be fair, don't readers sympathize more quickly with a tortured character? Harry was an orphan living under the stairs ...