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Oct 11, 2015 at 6:31pm
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Setting is a cruise they meet at. (Divine providence) 14 days-where they meet, are attracted, but each know their own faith is strong and straight. Since most don't agree with their doctrines, they (not telling the other their thoughts) formally decide to not discuss doctrine or share the name of their church. They will be friends for the 14 days and say goodbye. There is a evil afoot in the rich (B--h) who decided she wants him for her love during the 14 to prove she still has "it."

I would like to know what things the kids did to put your husband in trouble. These kids feel MC1 (Josslene) is a bad influence on their father, (They should be worried about the Divorce' ) They feel the deeper they see their father attracted and supporting Josslene, the more he will be so attached to her, he'll want to move away or leave their faith to follow her. (They have no faith in him) They try to get her to talk about religious doctrine, but she sees through it and won't talk.
They give her miss information so she doesn't show up to go on an excursion with them, They arrange the dinner table so she isn't sitting with Him but with his parents... Which backfires and the parents come to like her inspite of their g-kids..... Any other ideas?


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