I have written 1 story so far (2079257/Wonderland) and I put a lot of effort in it. Even so it took a while to get the rhymes and symbolism right (every single stanza is connected and means something different) and even so, the thing has 3 meanings all together (along with around 20 meanings with the stanzas...). I wrote about a world where everything is alive, breaking the line between personification and the real thing within the story. I'd love a review from you guys, considering i am fairly new to writing poetry (i am not new to symbolism or reading poetry) and would love some help...
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