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Dec 5, 2019 at 7:18pm
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Re: Phyllis's DISCUSSION: Commitment
by Dave Author IconMail Icon
*Dollar* 200 GPs were sent to 🌻 pwheeler ~ happy new year Author Icon with this post.
A true delight!

The poem is written in accordance with Lilli ☕ Author IconMail Icon's description of the Lento, but she failed to mention one of the most important features ("The fun part of this poem is thrown in here as all the FIRST words of each verse should rhyme."), as explained in the link and shown in the example she provided.

I am going to notify her of that discrepancy now.

Let the creativity flow from your soul! *Cool*
Dave
"The Poet's Place Open in new Window.
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DISCUSSION: Commitment · 12-02-19 4:23pm
by Dave Author IconMail Icon
Re: DISCUSSION: Commitment · 12-02-19 8:14pm
by Lisa Noe Author IconMail Icon
Re: Re: DISCUSSION: Commitment · 12-02-19 10:52pm
by Jay O'Toole Author IconMail Icon
Re: Re: Re: DISCUSSION: Commitment · 12-03-19 8:12am
by Lisa Noe Author IconMail Icon
Re: Lisa's DISCUSSION: Commitment · 12-03-19 1:22pm
by Dave Author IconMail Icon
Re: DISCUSSION: Commitment · 12-02-19 10:49pm
by Jay O'Toole Author IconMail Icon
Re: Jay O'Toole's DISCUSSION: Commitment · 12-03-19 1:27pm
by Dave Author IconMail Icon
Re: Re: Jay O'Toole's DISCUSSION: Commitment · 12-03-19 1:52pm
by Jay O'Toole Author IconMail Icon
Re: DISCUSSION: Commitment · 12-05-19 11:32am
by Past Member 'oldmonty'
Re: Monty's DISCUSSION: Commitment · 12-05-19 6:31pm
by Dave Author IconMail Icon
Re: Tink's DISCUSSION: Commitment · 12-05-19 11:42am
by Tinker Author IconMail Icon
Re: Re: Tink's DISCUSSION: Commitment · 12-05-19 6:59pm
by Dave Author IconMail Icon
Re: DISCUSSION: Commitment · 12-05-19 6:39pm
by 🌻 pwheeler ~ happy new year Author IconMail Icon
*Star* Re: Phyllis's DISCUSSION: Commitment · 12-05-19 7:18pm
by Dave Author IconMail Icon
Re: Re: Phyllis's DISCUSSION: Commitment · 12-06-19 6:17am
by Lilli ☕ Author IconMail Icon
Re: Re: Phyllis's DISCUSSION: Commitment · 12-06-19 4:54pm
by 🌻 pwheeler ~ happy new year Author IconMail Icon
Re: Re: Re: Phyllis's DISCUSSION: Commitment · 12-06-19 5:50pm
by Dave Author IconMail Icon
Re: Re: Re: Re: Phyllis's DISCUSSION: Commitment · 12-06-19 5:59pm
by 🌻 pwheeler ~ happy new year Author IconMail Icon

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