I know the word count is a tad high. I will try and scale it down before the end of the contest but it is a pretty good story with some traces of blue while having the elements of a bit of a surprise at the beginning, a moment of fear and a happy ending. Come to think of it, it has a bit of a surprise at the end as well. I hope you will overlook my verbosity just this once...
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