October Novel Prep Challenge

Hi,
Thank you very much. I see very good points on both questions. The Aniwaya in this story is based on the translation The Clan which I am putting as the name of a highly secretive society existing within the Qualla Boundary (the Cherokee reservation).

I like the idea of telling the story from both POV's throughout the story, which gives me more ideas and solves some other issues.
Thank you,
Kristina