I read your story and I think rather than skipping the time you should show it passing I gave you more detailed suggestions in my review but I think what I am saying here is if it contributes to the story to skip boring stuff you can do as the previous poster suggested. But you should consider whether the story would be better served by showing what happens during that time.
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