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Oct 3, 2022 at 12:04pm
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Commentary: "Of Paralysis and Procrastination"
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I don't have much to say about this four-chapter stub. It was the co-winner in a poll of readers. I didn't have any ideas for it, and mostly just tried following the clue that rugal laid down in "Assertiveness, that Will should try being more assertive. But he also had a mask that needed playing with. I rather suspect that the mask has distracted him from trying to improve his personality (a constant temptation for Will; pretending to be a developed personality is much easier than doing the work of developing his own), and my own interest kind of dribbled away after he got the mask onto and off of Mia.

But Mia is a character that other BoM authors have sometimes mentioned an interest in. Maybe this will goad them into picking up things from here.
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Commentary: "Of Paralysis and Procrastination" · 10-03-22 12:04pm
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