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Oct 9, 2023 at 3:27pm
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Re: Change in Premise
by H❀pe Author IconMail Icon
Looks like a big plot spoiler, I wonder if that part about Althea should be writer-only knowledge at this point. Or perhaps only hinted at? eg a mention of what Althea's relationship with him is, and if she is helpful or a hindrance to his investigation.

But please feel free to ignore my comment!


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Change in Premise · 10-09-23 3:21pm
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Re: Re: Change in Premise · 10-09-23 5:09pm
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Re: Re: Re: Change in Premise · 10-11-23 4:09am
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