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Nov 5, 2023 at 5:57pm
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Shattered...
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The old grandfather clock ticked its warning in the dim hallway, the echo of its tock a somber prelude to the storm outside. Rain splattered against the window panes like a barrage of tiny fists, demanding entry into the warm, golden-lit foyer of the Harper residence.

James, a thin slip of a boy with hair the color of autumn leaves, stood before the fireplace, the flickering shadows casting a giant's silhouette against the wall. In his hand, he held the remnants of a vase, once whole and cherished, now a puzzle of porcelain that could never be put back together. His heart drummed a frantic rhythm, mimicking the chaos of the storm outside and the cacophony of broken promises inside.

"You're in trouble now," whispered his older sister, Sarah, her voice barely rising above the crackling fire. Her eyes were wide saucers, reflecting the dance of the flames. The words hung in the air, a sentence that seemed to stretch and fill the space between them.

Their mother's footsteps were a soft counterpoint to the raging symphony of the tempest, a dread-filled crescendo as she entered the room. Her gaze fell upon the shattered vase, then to James, and there it lingered. He could feel the weight of her disappointment, a tangible force that seemed to squeeze the breath from his chest.

"I'm sorry," he managed, the words feeble and inadequate against the gravity of his mistake.

His mother knelt beside him, her eyes not on the vase but on his face, searching. "It's just a thing, James," she said, her voice surprisingly gentle. "We can replace a thing. But honesty, owning up to our mistakes—that takes courage. And that's what really matters."
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Shattered... · 11-05-23 5:57pm
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