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Jan 7, 2024 at 7:37pm
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In the dusty attic of an old Victorian house, nestled between forgotten heirlooms and moth-eaten clothes, an ancient straw doll sat. Its button eyes had seen a century roll by, its stitched smile a mask to the sorrows it harbored. The house, once brimming with laughter and life, now lay silent, its last inhabitant an old woman named Marjorie.

"This is the last straw," Marjorie muttered daily, battling the loneliness and the echoes of a family long gone. Her words were never meant for anyone, yet the straw doll listened, its own fabric growing heavier with each passing day.

One twilight, as the sun dipped below the horizon, painting the sky in melancholic hues, Marjorie ascended to the attic. Her hands trembled as she held the doll, her constant, silent companion. "You're the last piece of them I have," she whispered, tears glinting in her weary eyes.

That night, as Marjorie slept, the doll stirred. It had decided. It couldn't bear her sorrow anymore. It was the last straw. The doll pulled at its threads, loosening the straw within, and began to fill the house with it, trailing it into every room, every shadowed corner, knitting the essence of bygone days into the very fabric of the house.

When morning came, Marjorie awoke to a house transformed. Each room bloomed with memories, vivid and warm. Laughter echoed, not from ghosts, but from the joy embedded in the walls, the furniture, the very air she breathed. The doll lay empty, a hollow shell.

"This is the last straw," she said, a smile breaking through her tears. But this time, it was different. This time, it was a statement of gratitude. She was no longer alone, surrounded by a lifetime of love, woven by the last straw of a devoted, silent friend.
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