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Jon finishes highschool a star QB but he finds it is hard to stay in shape over summer
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Chapter #4

The girls say something

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"You look terrible"!!!!!! Susan say's to Jon. "I have never seen you so out of shape"!!!!!!
Tracy, Pam, and Mindy began to laugh loudly.
"It's nothin guys", Jon say's to them. "All it takes is one session in the gym. I can get back into shape very quickly".

"O.k. then", say's Pam. "It's just so weird seeing you fat".
"It sure is", say's Mindy.
"i think you look terrible also", Tracy adds.

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1. Jon becomes angry at the criticism

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2. Jon punches Tracy in the face over her remarks

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