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Rouge the Bat from Sonic the Hedgehog fame finds a magic Hypnosis Ring!

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Chapter #6

Go after Fiona.

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As Rouge soared out of a hole in the temple's roof, she heard a familiar voice cry out in anger from below.

"OH SON OF A BITCH!" came the scream from Fiona Fox, the red headed vixen staring at the pedestal on which Rouge's new ring had stood. Rouge smirked, realising an opportunity to both annoy and humiliate her old rival, and gain her first servant sooner than expected.

The bat lowered herself back down to Fiona's level, sitting on the pedestal.

"Oh, you have got to be fucking kidding me!" Fiona growled. "The one time I try to go back to my roots, you beat me to it again!?"

Rouge just smiled.

"You really should watch your language, Fiona, it's not very ladylike." She taunted. Fiona rolled her eyes and was about to retort when Rouge raised the ring, and continued. "Allow me to fix that for you."

A thin, pink beam fired from the gemstone, straight into Fiona's eyes, which turned as pink as the ray that struck them. The vixen's aggressive stance instantly relaxed, and her jaw went slack. Rouge floated over to her captive, and placed her finger under the redhead's chin, lifting her drooping head up, and caressing her face.

"Now, repeat after me: You are a slave." Rouge ordered.

"I am a slave." Fiona replied.

"You are my slave." Rouge continued.

"I am your slave." Fiona repeated.

"You love being my slave."

"I love being your slave."

"You love everything about me."

"I love everything about you."

"You love me so much you obey my every command."

"I love you so much I obey your every command."

"You love me so much you dress like me."

"I love you so much I dress like you."

"You act like me."

"I act like you."

"You speak like me."

"I speak like you."

"You wear the same makeup as me."

"I wear the same makeup as you."

Rouge shut the ring off, and Fiona collapsed into her new owner's arms.

"How do you feel, my pretty little pet?" Rouge asked.

Fiona quickly dropped to her knees.

"I feel wonderful just seeing you, my Mistress, but, why am I wearing this weird outfit?" She replied.

"Don't worry about that, sweetie, it's time I took you home, for the makeover you need." Rouge commanded.

"Yes Mistress." Fiona replied.

Rouge picked Fiona up in her arms, and carried her back to Club Rouge. They headed to Rouge's room.

"Undress, Fiona." Rouge ordered.

"At once, Mistress." Fiona giggled, blushing as she pulled her black leather clothing off, and untied her yellow bow, before standing at attention, completely naked.

You have the following choices:

*Pen*
1. Rouge gives Fiona the patented "Rouge makeover."

2. Rouge decided to have some "fun" with her slave first.

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