Chapter #6submissive by: NVR   Alice smiles at your entranced state and goes to play on her laptop for a bit while the hypnotic DVD does its magic on you. You've already proved to be very easily hypnotized, so you quickly and effectively soak up the instructions provided in the "movie"
- I like it when a girl bosses me around
- I enjoy making girls feel happy
- I cannot help but feel submissive around girls
- I should obey girls because they are smarter
- I believe what girls say because they know better
- It feels good when I do what a girl says
- It feels good when I please a girl
- It makes me happy when I'm useful to girls
- When a girl tells me to do something, I feel compelled to obey
- When a girl takes charge, I like it and encourage it
Along with plenty of variations and even a couple focused on "your cousin Alice" thrown in for good measure for around half an hour
When you wake up you're in Alice's bed, not really remembering anything after than arriving at your aunt's house and deciding to sleep in Alice's room. You were still a bit groggy when you saw her come into the room, and actually blushed a bit thinking how beautiful she was. Her striking blue eyes, her cute haircut, her fashion style.. you somehow felt a bit startruck which made her giggle at your face, and look even cuter to you as a consequence.
"Did you have a good nap? You barely arrived and told me you were so tired you needed to sleep a while" Alice chirped, testing to see if you remembered anything about your previous experience with her. She smiled when you confirmed her suspicions
"Yeah, although I still feel a bit tired for some reason" you casually commented, standing up and stretching a bit. "Thanks for that, I will fix up the bed don't worry, just let me unpack my things.. hmm where are they?"
"Good! Oh, your luggage is in the closet.. You should also clean the whole room now that you're at it by the way" she mentioned as she pointed out to a spot with old clothes and shoes thrown on the floor. She looked at you curiously, waiting for your answer
"Huh... You should do that yourself?" you said very unconvicingly. You hated doing chores so normally you would have just flipped her off at such a suggestion, but maybe you still felt groggy or something because a part of you seemed to be telling you to do it and help her out
"Why should I do it when you can do it for me?" Alice shrugged her shoulders and looked at you with a confident expression, like she was sure you would cave in, why would you? but for some reason you found that attitude strangely attractive, and she just looked so beautiful..
"Huh, ok I will" you said, and any feelings of regret were overloaded by the rush you felt when you accepted and when you saw the delighted expression on Alice's face
"Really, thanks Pat!" she exclaimed happily, not really believing yet she succesfully manipulated you but thinking things were off to a great start. She had great plans for you, hopefully as her first long term hypnosis subject. "I'll be downstairs relaxing in the living room, come join me when you're done" she said as she left you alone wondering why you got another tiny rush when she said she would be "relaxing"
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