Ah, yes, Tsubaki. The nice, quiet, attractive girl who ate her brother's soul, and lives with Black Star. I came to my attention that the creator of Soul Eater wasted a perfectly good character with her, and could had more character development too. It's like only a couple of chapters she flashes out her personality, and then goes back to be Black Star's weapon, and reacting whatever is happening to him. Though, in the magna the "Lust Chapter" in the book of Eibon could put her in a new light, and might even suggest her reason to attack Black Star when he's peeping is because he isn't hiding well, and on some level is okay and enjoys him doing it. But that is pure speculation, and speculation is not valid enough to go on most of the time. And recently I found out on Tvtropes on the YMMV page of Soul Eater Not!, that her new design is the biggest base breaker on the show about the original cast. Some people find it a minor and unneeded change to make her bust size bigger. Watch this video to see it, and skip to 2:13 to see what I mean. https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=6hTzy4f-c1...
Which is strange really. I don't want to just make this devolve into a rant, there's not enough space for one. So, just for the sake of why not, Tsuabki's new design is what she looks like in this story. Minus the blush spots. I did read one fanfic that said the writer feels like Tsubaki is just keep around for fanservice these days, which is sad. Though it could be worse. Stephen Meyer could own Soul Eater, and decided it needs a change, and we all know about how female characters are in a well known work of hers. Don't think about it too much, you'll RAGE from disgust. Or for Warhammer 40k fans, it could be written by our spiritual liege, Matt Ward (note this one of the good things he did. http://1d4chan.org/images/0/07/Trazyn.jp... Trollzan is awesome), or done be done by C.S. Goto.
Whew! Sorry if that became a rant for you. I don't know why the creator of Soul Eater did it, and the fandom can rage about things, like all fandoms can, but let's just deal with it and march on. People and fandoms can make as much sense as these pictures:
http://1d4chan.org/images/3/3e/AwesomeWT...
http://1d4chan.org/images/e/ef/Lolwutt.p...
So, with all of that mess out of the way, let's begin! And here's the choices:
1: Expansion. Though with her new design, that might not make much sense.
2: Here's an actual story for ya here, and OCs are allowed, just no Mary Sues. Got it? Chapters with Mary Sues will be destroyed. Anyway on to the story: Let's say Tsubaki finally cracks. She's had enough of Black Star and his ego, and quits being his partner, and wants a new one. If you chose to do an OC, though since there's mainly focus on the main students of the DWMA or other characters with minor plot relevance and given names, you could add dozens of OCs easily with the slightest contradiction of canon, you can have your OC become her new partner.
Just here's the guidelines: No Mary Sues, and make your OC make sense. And there will be an option for her to forgive Black Star, and become his weapon again. She can not instantly like your OC right off the bat. I know she's real accepting and could work with anybody, but she will have to be a judge and do a screening on them. Yes, you can have her date your OC, but don't put it right out there in the beginning, work to it. Sex chapters? I'll allow, but at least provide a head's up on the chapter before it. And do some sort of plot leading to it. And most chapters will be mainly focusing on Tsuabki. Unless it's a chapter that focusing on your OC. I think that's good enough.
Or, I'll just put a romance option for it.
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