Chapter #1Stay Determined by: Derpus   [writer's note: I will remove the link to the image if asked by the artist]
Your name is Frisk. You are a young child of indeterminate gender who has wandered up into Mt. Ebott and fallen into the chasm inside for reason known only to yourself. Your determination has allowed you to have a certain amount of control over the flow of time. You've SAVED and gone through the underground more times than you can count. However, you often felt the influence of a malevolent force controlling your actions every now and then, making you do things you can't bear to think about. This time will be different, you think to yourself. Nothing is going to control you now. This time, you will save the underworld for good. At least, that's what you hope.
You were surprised to find that Flowey, a being that had quickly become the bane of your existence, was nowhere to be found from where you first fell down again. By now, you had gotten a good way into your journey, and it was odd that he hadn't shown up yet. You didn't even catch a sight of him sneaking behind you as he often did. This wasn't normal, but you had figured that, since he also had knowledge of RESETS and SAVES, that it might be because he knows you won't fall for his tricks. You knew that you'd inevitably run into him after getting to the barrier, so you weren't too worried. Nothing he did surprised you anymore.
Having just saved Undyne from heat death, you had decided to head back and try to befriend her. As you walked through the seaweed, a thick vine suddenly wrapped itself around your entire body, holding you firmly in place!
"Howdy!"
You groaned as you heard that familiar high-pitched voice. You didn't think he would turn up this soon.
"Heya buddy", Flowey greeted. "Looks like you're a little stuck there", he said, feigning concern as you struggled against your binds. "Betcha didn't expect to see me here, huh?" He continued. "Now, we've been doing this for a while now, and by now you probably think you've got everything figured out."
You tried to scream out, hoping maybe your arm-less monster friend was still nearby, but no sound came out.
"And you know what? I'm pretty sick of going through the motions. Picking on you when you fall down, killing Asgore, becoming a god and all that", Flowey continued. "So, I decided to change things up a little", he said, tightening his grip on you. "Instead of messing with you at the entrance and watching your every move, I've been using my time to work on something special for ya." With that, he stuck his tongue out and winked as a surge of energy flowed through the vine and into your body, giving you an incredibly painful experience. More vines wrapped around you, seeming to drain your energy and replacing it with... something else. Your mind nearly went blank when your binds were finally unwrapped. Once they returned to the ground, you fell limp to the ground as the world was spinning around you.
Flowey laughed as you struggled to return to your feet. "You really are an idiot!", he laughed maniacally as two leaves sprouted from the sides of him. "I bet you don't even know what I just did, but I'll give you a moment to guess", Flowey said before pausing. "Nope? Nothin'? Well I'll just tell you. I just drained away some of your DETERMINATION. Not all of it, but just enough to give me control of the timeline again", he said, laughing. "And a little extra to give me this..." With that, the two leaves on the sides of Flowey pushed down on the ground and he popped out of the ground, revealing that he had gained a pear-shaped body, as well as a set of arms and legs, along with a rather... generously sized behind. (though he was still about half your size)
[pic for reference: https://e621.net/post/show/1252260 ]
"Pretty jealous, huh?", he said, walking up to you with a confident stride. "But don't worry, I gave something to you in return. In addition to draining your DETERMINATION, I went ahead and changed your body's makeup for ya. That ought to make things way more fun. In fact, I think I'm gonna have some fun with you right now..." Flowey licked his lips as he walked closer to you, clearly having ill intentions.
You didn't want to wait to see what the sadistic flower had in mind. Not even thinking about what happened to your body, you got up and ran as fast as you could, trying to get as far away from your attacker as possible.
"Aww, come on, buddy. You're not being a very good friend, ya know", he said as he slowly walked to your direction. He wasn't in a hurry to catch you. He had control over the timeline again, after all. You were basically already his.
You eventually grew tired of running and found a group of echo flowers to hide in. Now having a chance to catch your breath, you examined your self to see what he meant about altering your body's makeup. To your horror, you found that...  | Members who added to this interactive story also contributed to these: |
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