Chapter #5Storm Rider by: Unknown “How about we try the water slide!” Mary exclaimed with glee, bouncing up and down like…well like a little girl.
“Do you mean Storm Rider?” You asked her. You had done some research on the park in an attempt to seem knowledgeable. Mary nodded her head in agreement.
“Yeah! That’s the one!” Mary turned to Jack. “What do you think Jackie? Sound fun?”
“Anything’s fun when I’m with you!” Jack grinned from ear to ear, and Mary blushed. You couldn’t help but smile at the young love blossoming right before your eyes.
“Water slide it is then.” You began to walk off towards the waterslide with Mary and Jack in tow. The line for the ride was extremely long, but the three of you were content to spend the time chatting about life and plans for the rest of the day. Before you knew it you had almost made it up to the top.
As Mary and Jack shared a funny story from school, you unconsciously took a step backwards. You felt your elbow bump into something soft and squishy, followed by a short squeal. You whipped around to find that you had bumped your arm into the massive breasts of a teenage girl standing behind you. You apologized profusely and the girl accepted your apology, but you also stole a quick glance at her before turning back around.
The girl had short blonde hair and blue eyes. She was wearing a tight red one-piece bikini that clung to her body like a second skin. Her larger-than-life breasts seemed ready to tear the fabric of her bikini apart at any given time. Her boobs were pressed hard together, and she just looked so gorgeous that you couldn’t help but be jealous. You were quite the gorgeous woman, and you knew this, but this girl was even hotter than you, and she couldn’t be any older than 20.
As you approached the top of the line, you realized that this ride wasn’t safe at all for Jack to go down. You managed to convince the children of this, and Jack was soon crushed into a tiny loop and wrapped around Mary’s wrist like a rubber band. Mary caressed him gently, and you knew that he would be safe in her care. At this point you were more worried about your own safety. It wasn’t like you could back down now though.
It was Mary’s turn to go down the slide, and she jumped into the chute and raced out of sight with a high-pitched shriek of delight. A minute passed and you were given the go-ahead. You sat down on the slide and pushed off. In seconds the output of water was sending you barreling down the slide at insane speeds.
The slide was built into the side of a fake mountain, which also served as the backdrop for several other slides and water rides. As such, a portion of the ride took place inside of the mountain. It was pitch black in there, preventing anyone inside from seeing what was going on. Anyone outside couldn’t see either, and these terrifying thoughts raced through your head as you sped into the mountain.
Your spun along several more turns, but just as you had the notion to enjoy yourself, you felt your legs being instantly crushed flat. They had caught in a small crack in the slide, folding up and wedging into the gaps in the plastic. Your upper body shot forward and slammed face first into the hard plastic of the slide. The rushing water was relentless, and soon your body was flattened down onto the slide like a sticker.
You tried your hardest to free yourself from this predicament, but it was useless. You couldn’t move a muscle. The water pressing down on you from above was keeping you flattened and stuck. It would take a force of considerable weight to free you from this slide. You thought about how worried Jack and Mary probably were, and wished that something…anything would free you from this mess.
You soon regretted making that wish. A minute later, the speed of the water rushing over you increased. Something was heading down the slide. The distant sound a girlish scream made it abundantly clear it was the sexy teenage girl from before. She most likely had no idea what had happened to you. As her curvaceous body rushed closer and closer to you, you could only think of one thing: Was she going to make things better, or worse?  indicates the next chapter needs to be written. |
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