While Steve was pondering what to do next, he heard his wife call to him. "Babe, what're you doing?" she called from another room.
Nicole quickly tried to call for help but was swallowed up by the giant fist of her father. "Nothing," Steve responded, trying desperately to ensure his wife could not hear the cries of his tiny daughter.
"Can you grab my gym shoes? I'm going for a jog."
Steve slipped Nicole into his back pocket and headed off to his bedroom. As he lifted up the worn, sweaty pair of shoes, a sinister thought crept into his mind. He took a deep inhale of the shoes. The aroma was foul yet intoxicating. And it gave him the perfect idea for how to punish his daughter.
Steve placed Nicole on the nightstand and aimed the shrink ray at her. "This is for yelling for mom's help," he said, and pulled the trigger, reducing her to half her size. Poor Nicole now stood at 1/2 inch tall. Steve then proceeded to lift his tiny daughter between two fingers up to his face.
"I'll see you after your punishment, Nikki," her dad said with a sly laugh.
"What do you mean?" Nicole asked in a worried voice.
Steve didn't answer, he just lowered his bug sized daughter into the gym shoe of his wife.
Nicole's eyes were already burning and she was trying not to vomit at the scent.
Steve brought the shoes to his wife and smiled. He noticed she wasn't going to be wearing socks on this jog. "Even better," he thought to himself.
"Alright honey, I'll be back in an hour," Debbie said and leaned in to give Steve a kiss. After some stretching, Debbie was out the door on her run.
--
Inside the shoe, Nicole's surroundings were quickly becoming a hell. There was almost no clean air down here. The ground was soaked in her mother's disgusting foot sweat. Her eyes burned and she could hold her vomit no longer. If that wasn't enough, she was in constant fear of being crushed underneath her mom's gigantic foot. Between the constant pressure of the foot, the lack of air, and the motion sickness, Nicole began to fade in and out of consciousness.
--
One our later, Debbie returned to the house. "Back so soon?" Steve said with a laugh, noticing his wife was clearly very sweaty and exhausted.
Debbie just rolled her eyes with a smile. "I'm gonna hop in the shower soon," she said and slipped off her shoes. Debbie proceeded to walk into their bedroom and close the door.
Steve walked up to the right shoe in which Nicole was in and knelt down in front of it. The odor was incredibly strong and must've been atrocious for Nicole. "Well, well, well, did we learn a lesson," Steve teased and lifted up the shoe.
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